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Batwing Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Grammar, sentence construction and writing style

Can you please check for grammatical errors and about whether this paragraph below makes any sense.



"Life is a game. I'm only saying this because Life always brings you the plot twist. While you are riding in your Ferrari thinking everything has been going for you lately, you're met with an accident. Or when you're broken by the terrors of poverty, you win a lottery. You never know what's ahead of you even when the outcome seems so obvious. You roll the dice and the dice decides what's for you next."

  

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Batwing "Life is a game. I'm only saying this because Life always brings you the an unexpected turn of events as/like a plot twist. or brings you the unexpected.

  • Batwing "Life is a game.
  • I'm only saying this because Life always brings you the an unexpected turn of events as/like a plot twist.
  • or brings you the unexpected.
  • Q: how exactly is a plot twist related to a game?
  • I made suggestions by adding "turn of events" because we 'take turns' when we play a game and "turn of events" is a common idiomatic expression.
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Batwing"Life is a game. I'm only saying this because Life always brings you the an unexpected turn of events as/like a plot twist. or brings you the unexpected.

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