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0(1) While in the 00, she formed the National Committee on Federal Legislation for Birth Control, remaining its president until 1937, and lobbied Franklin Delano Roosevelt for support, pointing out that birth control 01i00would help reduce Depression welfare by allowing married women time to work.02i00 She was advised 01i00to change her course to working to change laws 02i00that would give doctors the right to dispense birth control to anyone who requested it.02br
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00Do the italics phrase needs rephrasing? Please advise.02br
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00(2) Born 00, Catt was the second of the three children of 00 and Maria Clinton of 00.02br
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00Is the phrase " 00" ok? Please clarify.02br
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00(3) Matching his wife's enthusiasm for tackling sensitive issues, Leo Chapman was sued for liable, following a cruel attack on a local politician.02br
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00Is the usage of phrase "was sued for liable," ok? Please check.02br
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00(4) In 2004, the recounting of Paul's efforts were moved into the arena of popular culture through the release of the HBO film, "Iron Jawed Angels," which recounted the era of White House protests and incarceration, including the graphic unfolding of the force-feeding of prisoners.02br
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00Is the s-v agreement ok in "the recounting…were"? Should it be "was"?02br
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00(5) On May 15, 1968, at eighty seven, she led over five thousand women in a march on 00 to demand the 00 withdraw from the Vietnam War.02br
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00Can "United States withdraw" be changed to "00 withdraw"? Is it adjective usage? Please clarify.02br
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00(6) This departure from her expected role further impaired her already weakened marriage, and in l974, she and her husband of eleven years were divorced.02br
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00Is the phrase " she and her husband of eleven years" ok? Do we need to rephrase?02br
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00(7) Preferring to give someone new an opportunity for the position, Wilma Mankiller did not seek reelection.02br
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00Can " new an opportunity" rephrased better?0-
  

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01font00(1) While in the United States, she formed the National Committee on Federal Legislation for Birth Control, remaining its president until 1937, and lobbied Franklin Delano Roosevelt for support, pointing out that birth control 01i00would help reduce Depression welfare by allowing married women time to work.02i

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