0Hello and welcome to my thread.02br
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00My English teacher has corrected a translation of mine, and while I don't doubt her abilities, I would like a second opinion.02br
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00The questions are as follows:02br
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01li- 00 "01b00A lot of02b00 progress was made[...]" or "01b00Much02b00 progress was made[...]" - 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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01li- 01b00planter02b00 or 01b00plantation owner02b00 - 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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01li- 00 01b00sugar mill02b00 or 01b00cane mill - 02b01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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01li- 00 "[...] and it was difficult to 01b00identify02b00 the culprits." or "[...] and it was difficult to 01b00find02b00 the culprits." - 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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01li- 00 "Many died from the 01b00inhuman02b00 conditions on board the ships." or "Many died from the 01b00inhumane02b00 conditions on board the ships." - 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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01li- 00"The survivors were sold like cattle to white planters at auctions, where 01b00men02b00 often were separated from their wives and children." or "The survivors were sold like cattle to white planters at auctions, where 01b00husbands 02b00often were separated from their wives and children." - 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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00What's the difference between saying 'often were' separated from their wives and children, and 'were often' separated from their wives and children? My teacher says that they are both correct, however, it looks better if you write "often were separated". So, in effect, the auxiliary verb lies next to the verb.02br
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01li- 00 00The strongest men and women worked in the (01b00is '01i00the'02i00 really needed here02b00?) tobacco and cotton fields in the South and at sugar mills in the 00.02li
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01li- 00 "Only few – especially beautiful, young Negro girls – worked as house slaves [...]" or "Only01b00 a02b00 few – especially 01b00the02b00 beautiful, young Negro girls – worked as house slaves [...]" 01i00which one is better02i00?02li
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00Thanks beforehand,02br
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00Ben.0-