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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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I think these sentence still has a lot of room for improvement.
Can you help me check them. Thank you very much.
It is Analects of Confucius that can stimulate a child’s development of brain, and thus benefit a child.
It is Analects of Confucius that initiate a child to be a decent person in the future.
Confucius stresses not only social concerns but also the virtual of filial piety.
Analects of Confucius can inculcate a child what the filial piety is and why we have to do it.
I think these sentence still has a lot of room for improvement.
Can you help me check them. Thank you very much.
It is Analects of Confucius that can stimulate a child’s development of brain, and thus benefit a child.
It is Analects of Confucius that initiate a child to be a decent person in the future.
Confucius stresses not only social concerns but also the virtual of filial piety.
Analects of Confucius can inculcate a child what the filial piety is and why we have to do it.
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Hello K²
They're not quite right.
Perhaps:
'The Analects of Confucius can stimulate a child’s mental development, and thus benefit that child.'
'The Analects of Confucius set a child on the path to being a decent person.'
'Confucius stresses not only social concerns but also the virtue of filial piety.'
'The Analects of Confucius can
They're not quite right.
Perhaps:
'The Analects of Confucius can stimulate a child’s mental development, and thus benefit that child.'
'The Analects of Confucius set a child on the path to being a decent person.'
'Confucius stresses not only social concerns but also the virtue of filial piety.'
'The Analects of Confucius can
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