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Perfect Stranger Posted 11 years ago
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[grammar question and punctuation] 2 sentences with a lot of /and's/

Dear Users,

1) Is the following short passage written correctly?
2) Is it OK to use so many and's? I don't know where I should place commas...
3) Is in a manner of contrast acceptable?

It was a brief introduction based on XYZ structure and explanation of what we understand as the past and present and how we can connect them. In a manner of contrast we also used a few sentences in the past form.

Thank you.
  

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It was a brief introduction based on XYZ structure and an explanation of what we understand as the past and present and how we can connect them. As a contrast , we also used a few sentences in the past form . Perfect Stranger 1) Is the following short passage written correctly?

  • It was a brief introduction based on XYZ structure and an explanation of what we understand as the past and present and how we can connect them.
  • As a contrast , we also used a few sentences in the past form .
  • Perfect Stranger 1) Is the following short passage written correctly?
  • I've fixed it above.
  • Perfect Stranger 2) Is it OK to use so many and's?
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It was a brief introduction based on XYZ structure and an explanation of what we understand as the past and present and how we can connect them. As a contrast, we also used a few sentences in the past form.
Perfect Stranger1) Is the following short passage written correctly?
I've fixed it above.
Perfect Stranger
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Thank you very much indeed.

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