Grammar Question
Hey, do you have advice concerning this sentence:
Around 48 percent of the total revenue is gained, and 74 percent of all transactions are made from and in cash.
I am quite sure that you cannot write the sentence like that but is there any way to minimize the usage of "cash". I don't want to write "Around 48 percent of the total revenue is gained from cash and 74 percent of all transactions are made in cash".
Thanks in advance!
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themostanonymousanonymous Around 48 percent of the total revenue is gained, and 74 percent of all transactions are made from and in cash. If this is a financial statement, the first impression is " confusion", or at least not very clear. In finance, certain terminology is used to describe earnings.
- themostanonymousanonymous Around 48 percent of the total revenue is gained, and 74 percent of all transactions are made from and in cash.
- If this is a financial statement, the first impression is " confusion", or at least not very clear.
- In finance, certain terminology is used to describe earnings.
- Roughly / approximately/ about / nearly /around 48% of the revenue was /generated /came from......
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themostanonymousanonymousAround 48 percent of the total revenue is gained, and 74 percent of all transactions are made from and in cash.
If this is a financial statement, the first impression is " confusion", or at least not very clear. In finance, certain terminology is used to describe earnings. Roughly / approximately/ about / nearly /around 48% of the r
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