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Darrenz Posted 11 years ago
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grammar question

Hi there,

Is the grammar correct ?

As I was previously an administrator, I applied my expertise to overcome the challenges. I continued to seek and enhance my knowledge further as technology evolves rapidly.
  

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Hello, darrenz—and welcome to English Forums. I suggest that you simply: be more direct and less flowery: As an administrator, I applied my expertise to overcome challenges and continued to seek further knowledge as technology evolves.

  • Hello, darrenz—and welcome to English Forums.
  • I suggest that you simply: be more direct and less flowery: As an administrator, I applied my expertise to overcome challenges and continued to seek further knowledge as technology evolves.
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Hello, darrenz—and welcome to English Forums.
I suggest that you simply: be more direct and less flowery:

As an administrator, I applied my expertise to overcome challenges and continued to seek further knowledge as technology evolves.

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