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Gaw Kai Muh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Grammar Question

Hi English experts,
please mark my English grammar,thanks.My senior came to work today in view of a fever, she had been on leave for two days, in the afternoon she badgered me at workplace normally and I could be reticent only.
  

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please mark my English grammar,thanks. My senior came to work today in view of a fever, she had been on leave for two days, in the afternoon she badgered me at workplace normally and I could be reticent only. You have some errors and some unnatural wording.

— Clive

  • please mark my English grammar,thanks.
  • My senior came to work today in view of a fever, she had been on leave for two days, in the afternoon she badgered me at workplace normally and I could be reticent only.
  • You have some errors and some unnatural wording.
  • My supervisor came back to work today.
  • Because of a fever, she had been on leave for two days.
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please mark my English grammar,thanks.
My senior came to work today in view of a fever, she had been on leave for two days, in the afternoon she badgered me at workplace normally and I could be reticent only.

You have some errors and some unnatural wording.
My supervisor came back to work today. Because of a feve
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Why can't I use 'in view of' to replace 'because of'?
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How about this sentence?The girl is beautiful in that her skin is smooth.
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How about this sentence?The girl is beautiful in that her skin is smooth.

This is fine. 'In that' makes the speaker sound thoughtful and educated. More common would be 'because'.

Clive
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Why can't I use 'in view of' to replace 'because of'?

I wouldn't say it is wrong, but it does not sound natural.

Clive
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Dear Clive,
I am so scared,my English exam is next month.
how about this sentence?In view of my poor results,I must study harder from today onwards.
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Dear Clive,
it is so hard to use the words naturally.I cannot keep repeating the same words on the essay.How can I write them naturally?
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I am so scared,my English exam is next month.
Do they expect your English to be perfect? I doubt it. Try not to be nervous!
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Hi Clive,does this sentence sound natural?In view of his long hair,he looks handsome however he shouldn't be reticent about his personal information.
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Hi Clive,how about this sentence?This is a malfunction website in that majority of the features don't work at all.
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