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Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Grammar question

Hello
I don't know whether three stenences are right?
Can you help me check them?
Thank you very much.

Children lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job.

So seriously did one of my friends take his job that he didn’t know his mother came down with SARS until he watched news.

What is the quality of a son or a daughter is obedience.
  

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The/Their/Nepalese children lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job. ) So seriously did one of my friends take his job that he didn’t find out his mother had come down with SARS until he watched the news. The finest / most important / rarest quality of a son or a daughter is obedience.

  • The/Their/Nepalese children lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job.
  • ) So seriously did one of my friends take his job that he didn’t find out his mother had come down with SARS until he watched the news.
  • The finest / most important / rarest quality of a son or a daughter is obedience.
  • )
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The/Their/Nepalese children lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job. (Some kind of determiner or limiting adjective is necessary to make the sentence natural.)

So seriously did one of my friends take his job that he didn’t find out his mother had come down with SARS until he watched the news.

The finest / most imp
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MrM. Do I need to put a determiner if I rewritten the sentence:

Children used to live with their parents until they graduated from school.

Because I'm talking about children in general. Also, I have the same feeling about the original, I think the determiner could be left out, am I right?
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As a 'zoo sentence', that is, one that is constucted artificially and not out in nature, it is fine without the article, and so is your first one:

'Children used to live with their parents until they graduated from school.'
'Children lived with their parents until they graduated from school and found a job.'

Both of these are grammatically good. The reason I suggested som

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