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Adonis Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

Grammar question

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I don't know how to revise two sentences. Can you help me check them.
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When he entered MLB, many experts in baseball doubted whether he possessed enough genius to challenge MLB or not?

He immediately silenced all doubters. ,and he showed his ability to prove that he has a talent for baseball
  

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You can drop either the "When he entered MLB" or "in baseball". " Then the second half of the sentence you say "genius" referring to a baseball player. This isn't chess, it's a physical challenge with specific tactics and skills.

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  • You can drop either the "When he entered MLB" or "in baseball".
  • " Then the second half of the sentence you say "genius" referring to a baseball player.
  • This isn't chess, it's a physical challenge with specific tactics and skills.
  • I wouldn't say "genius" applies unless he was revolutionizing those tacitcs (cutoff men, backups, etc).
  • You could say that they "doubted whether he could succeed in the league" or something of that nature.
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You can drop either the "When he entered MLB" or "in baseball".

"When he entered MLB, many experts doubted whether..."
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"Many experts in baseball doubted whether..."

Then the second half of the sentence you say "genius" referring to a baseball player. This isn't chess, it's a physical challenge with specific tactics and skills. I wouldn't say "genius" applies unles
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