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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
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I gave many feedback to my team members when I did a group work at my university. However, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out what I did not do well after he saw my work. I felt bad at the first time I heard the advice because nobody had told me such a thing before but later I felt thankful for him giving me such a good advice because I was able to get a good grade after taking his advice and applying it to my work. This exprience thought me the importance of accepting an opinion from others and Jay became one of my best friends ever since.
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Not many errors. Just ' many feedback', ' at the first time', 'such a good advice', ' thought me', and ' became ... ever since'.
- Not many errors.
- Just ' many feedback', ' at the first time', 'such a good advice', ' thought me', and ' became ...
- ever since'.
- Here is another way to write it.
- When I did a group project at my university, I gave a lot of feedback to the other members of my team .
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Not many errors. Just 'many feedback', 'at the first time', 'such a good advice', 'thought me', and 'became ... ever since'.
Here is another way to write it.
When I did a group project at my university, I gave a lot of feedback to the other members of my team . However, after seeing my work, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out the things
Here is another way to write it.
When I did a group project at my university, I gave a lot of feedback to the other members of my team . However, after seeing my work, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out the things
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