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Unsafety2 Posted 13 years ago
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Grammar, pls help me. :3
Is about a description of a person, in this case, my brother.
My brother is more older than me. He usuarlly wear cream trousers. Today he's wearing black jeans, he looks good. He has got a beard, a short dark hair. Also he has got fair-skinned, well he's different from me because he has another mother. His eyes are brown, he's tall and slim.
Oh, i was forgetting to say, he's in his thirties. But he looks so good yet! :3 . Please help me and correct mi wrongs.
Thanks in advance.
My brother is more older than me. He usuarlly wear cream trousers. Today he's wearing black jeans, he looks good. He has got a beard, a short dark hair. Also he has got fair-skinned, well he's different from me because he has another mother. His eyes are brown, he's tall and slim.
Oh, i was forgetting to say, he's in his thirties. But he looks so good yet! :3 . Please help me and correct mi wrongs.
Thanks in advance.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised essay here. My brother is more older than me.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please fix them and post your revised essay here.
- My brother is more older than me.
- He usuarlly wear cream trousers.
- Today he's wearing black jea ns, h e looks good.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revised essay here.
My brother is more older than me. He usuarlly wear cream trousers. Today he's wearing black jeans, he looks good. He has got a beard, a short dark hair. Also he has got fair-skinned, well he's different from me because he has another mother. His
My brother is more older than me. He usuarlly wear cream trousers. Today he's wearing black jeans, he looks good. He has got a beard, a short dark hair. Also he has got fair-skinned, well he's different from me because he has another mother. His
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