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00 Im an English student, and I was asked to write a text, but before I submit it, I´d like if someone over here and give it a read and tell me my mistakes? hope one of you have time? thanx! 02 br
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00 Here it is: 02 br
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01 i 00 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. Parents are there only for support." 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 That’s completely true, but the way kids decide about how to dress, what do they do in their lives, who to go out with depends a lot on how they were raised and their experiences as younger kids. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude. On the other hand, if he was a kid who lived a childhood with respect and love from his parents and family, he is going to grow like someone self confident and his appearance is not going to be so "extreme" like other kids mentioned at the beginning of this text. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 I strongly believe that parents are so important, and their support is the key for kids and to define their future, if a kid doesn’t have his parent’s support, it’s going to be very difficult for him to trust people and to feel confident enough to decide on his own when he becomes an adult. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents. That’s why it’s very common to see that the kid becomes a doctor like his father, or a lawyer like his mother. 02 i 0-
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00 Im an English student, and I was asked to write a text, but before I submit it, I´d like if someone over here and give it a read and tell me my mistakes? hope one of you have time? thanx! 02 br
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00 Angy 02 br
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00 Here it is: 02 br
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01 i 00 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. Parents are there only for support." 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 That’s completely true, but the way kids decide about how to dress, what do they do in their lives, who to go out with depends a lot on how they were raised and their experiences as younger kids. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude. On the other hand, if he was a kid who lived a childhood with respect and love from his parents and family, he is going to grow like someone self confident and his appearance is not going to be so "extreme" like other kids mentioned at the beginning of this text. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 I strongly believe that parents are so important, and their support is the key for kids and to define their future, if a kid doesn’t have his parent’s support, it’s going to be very difficult for him to trust people and to feel confident enough to decide on his own when he becomes an adult. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents. That’s why it’s very common to see that the kid becomes a doctor like his father, or a lawyer like his mother. 02 i 0-
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0 01 i 00 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude. 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents.
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- 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude.
- 02 i 02 br 02 br 01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents.
- 02 i 02 br 01 i 00 I might be wrong, let's wait till others mark it 05 0 02 i 00 010id 5
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