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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Grammar mistakes can anyone help me please?
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01 i 00 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. Parents are there only for support." 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 That’s completely true, but the way kids decide about how to dress, what do they do in their lives, who to go out with depends a lot on how they were raised and their experiences as younger kids. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude. On the other hand, if he was a kid who lived a childhood with respect and love from his parents and family, he is going to grow like someone self confident and his appearance is not going to be so "extreme" like other kids mentioned at the beginning of this text. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 I strongly believe that parents are so important, and their support is the key for kids and to define their future, if a kid doesn’t have his parent’s support, it’s going to be very difficult for him to trust people and to feel confident enough to decide on his own when he becomes an adult. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents. That’s why it’s very common to see that the kid becomes a doctor like his father, or a lawyer like his mother. 02 i 02 br
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00 Hope anyone out there can help me to find my mistakes (incase I made a few?) I´ll strongly appreciate it 02 br
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00 09:57:33 p.m. 02 br
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00 thanx! 02 br
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00 Angelica 010id 1
01 i 00 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. Parents are there only for support." 02 i 02 br
02 br
01 i 00 That’s completely true, but the way kids decide about how to dress, what do they do in their lives, who to go out with depends a lot on how they were raised and their experiences as younger kids. 02 i 02 br
02 br
01 i 00 If a cild had a very bad childhood, he was hit by his parents and misrespected by other children he will become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very rude. On the other hand, if he was a kid who lived a childhood with respect and love from his parents and family, he is going to grow like someone self confident and his appearance is not going to be so "extreme" like other kids mentioned at the beginning of this text. 02 i 02 br
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01 i 00 I strongly believe that parents are so important, and their support is the key for kids and to define their future, if a kid doesn’t have his parent’s support, it’s going to be very difficult for him to trust people and to feel confident enough to decide on his own when he becomes an adult. 02 i 02 br
02 br
01 i 00 Parents are definitely a very important aspect , they are the example, the model that helps children to decide if he wants to be like his parents. That’s why it’s very common to see that the kid becomes a doctor like his father, or a lawyer like his mother. 02 i 02 br
02 br
00 Hope anyone out there can help me to find my mistakes (incase I made a few?) I´ll strongly appreciate it 02 br
02 br
00 09:57:33 p.m. 02 br
02 br
05 0 02 br
02 br
00 thanx! 02 br
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00 Angelica 010id 1
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0 Just some glaring errors. 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 i 10 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. 12 i 12 br 12 br 11 i 10 If a 11 b 10 cild 12 b 10 11 b 10 had 12 b 10 (tense consistency) a very bad childhood, he 11 b 10 was 12 b 10 hit by his parents and 11 b 10 misrespected 12 b 10 (wording) by other children he 11 b 10 will 12 b 10 become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very 11 b 10 rude (wording) 12 b 10 .
- 0 Just some glaring errors.
- 01 blockquote 01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 i 10 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle.
- 12 i 12 br 12 br 11 i 10 If a 11 b 10 cild 12 b 10 11 b 10 had 12 b 10 (tense consistency) a very bad childhood, he 11 b 10 was 12 b 10 hit by his parents and 11 b 10 misrespected 12 b 10 (wording) by other children he 11 b 10 will 12 b 10 become a rebel and his appearance is going to be very 11 b 10 rude (wording) 12 b 10 .
- 12 b 12 i 12 br 12 br 12 blockquote 10 0-
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0 Just some glaring errors. 01 blockquote
01 cite 10 Anonymous 12 cite 11 i 10 TOPIC: "Children should be able to make up their own minds about their appearance and lifestyle. Parents are there only for support." 12 i 12 br
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11 i 10 That’s completely true, but the way kids decide about how to dress, what 11 b 10 do
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