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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Grammar mistakes?
Could someone check if I made any grammar mistakes in the following paragraph?
Your help would really be appreciated.
"Still, bear in mind that the level of labor input decreased compared to the old model. In fact, this setting reduces the contribution of labor to output. Nonetheless, the marginal return with respect to labor will be higher."
Your help would really be appreciated.
"Still, bear in mind that the level of labor input decreased compared to the old model. In fact, this setting reduces the contribution of labor to output. Nonetheless, the marginal return with respect to labor will be higher."
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I find 'still' a bit informal and conversational in tone. Consider 'nevertheless'. I don't know enough about your topic and your preceding context to judge if 'in fact' is appropriate.
- I find 'still' a bit informal and conversational in tone.
- Consider 'nevertheless'.
- I don't know enough about your topic and your preceding context to judge if 'in fact' is appropriate.
- Clive
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I find 'still' a bit informal and conversational in tone. Consider 'nevertheless'.
I don't know enough about your topic and your preceding context to judge if 'in fact' is appropriate.
Clive
I don't know enough about your topic and your preceding context to judge if 'in fact' is appropriate.
Clive
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