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Haha1 Posted 14 years ago
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I suggested my team members with my feedback when I did a group work at my university. However, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out what was wrong after he saw my feedback. I felt bad at first time I heard the advice, but soon later I felt thankful for him giving me the advice because I got a good grade. After that, I could get along with Jay and realized the importance of accepting an opinion from others.
  

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haha1 I suggested my team members with my feedback when I did a group work at my university. However, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out what was wrong after he saw my feedback. I felt bad at first time I heard the advice, but soon later I felt thankful for him giving me the advice because I got a good grade.

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  • haha1 I suggested my team members with my feedback when I did a group work at my university.
  • However, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out what was wrong after he saw my feedback.
  • I felt bad at first time I heard the advice, but soon later I felt thankful for him giving me the advice because I got a good grade.
  • After that, I could get along with Jay and realized the importance of accepting an opinion from others.
  • The bold parts show problems.
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haha1I suggested my team members with my feedback when I did a group work at my university. However, one of the team members, Jay, pointed out what was wrong after he saw my feedback. I felt bad at first time I heard the advice, but soon later I felt thankful for him giving me the advice because I got a good grade. After that, I could ge
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