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I have translated an essay from danish to english, and I would just like you to read it and see if there are any grammatical mistakes? It would be a great help!
Here you go:
It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola. Along with millions of other people the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work. But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard work for both feet and pride, but Mikkolas mood does not seem to be damaged. "London is the best place," he says as he sees passengers' faces. You cannot make money in New York or Paris subways, but London 'attitudes toward young people are very friendly. On a ten hour day Mikkola can earn as much as £ 30th The idea is not just Mikkolas. To survive and every day be able to buy some bread at the bakery and some meat from the butcher's, more than 500 young musicians play from around the world on the London Underground. They play everything from guitar to harp. Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the years coldest months in the subway heat. But it is not enough to sing and play. You need an actor's ability to look innocent when cops show up. Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years, thereafter he does not know what to do. It is many young people's situation today in due to the unemployment, they feel restless and without a future.
I have translated an essay from danish to english, and I would just like you to read it and see if there are any grammatical mistakes? It would be a great help!Here you go:
It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola. Along with millions of other people the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work. But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard work for both feet and pride, but Mikkolas mood does not seem to be damaged. "London is the best place," he says as he sees passengers' faces. You cannot make money in New York or Paris subways, but London 'attitudes toward young people are very friendly. On a ten hour day Mikkola can earn as much as £ 30th The idea is not just Mikkolas. To survive and every day be able to buy some bread at the bakery and some meat from the butcher's, more than 500 young musicians play from around the world on the London Underground. They play everything from guitar to harp. Mikkola and many of these foreigners spend the years coldest months in the subway heat. But it is not enough to sing and play. You need an actor's ability to look innocent when cops show up. Taiken Mikkola has decided to stay in England for three years, thereafter he does not know what to do. It is many young people's situation today in due to the unemployment, they feel restless and without a future.
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I have underlined some problem areas: It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola. Along with millions of other people , the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work. But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work.
- I have underlined some problem areas: It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola.
- Along with millions of other people , the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work.
- But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work.
- It is hard work for both feet and pride, but Mikkolas mood does not seem to be damaged .
- "London is the best place," he says as he sees passengers' faces.
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I have underlined some problem areas:
It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola. Along with millions of other people, the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work. But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard work f
It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new work day for Taiken Mikkola. Along with millions of other people, the 18-year-old Finn go down into the subway to begin the day's work. But as soon Mikkola has come down on the subway platform, he pulls up a trumpet and is already at work. It is hard work f
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