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English11996 Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Grammar mistakes
Can you guys please help fixed some grammar mistakes in this sentence. I know there is something wrong with it but again, I can't seem to be able to spot it. Thanks for you help!
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Thus, throughout this novel, you’ll see countlessly many times that Marcus deliberately try to do everything he can to sabotage this corrupted system
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The underlined part is what I'm really concerned about. Thanks for helping
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Thus, throughout this novel, you’ll see countlessly many times that Marcus deliberately try to do everything he can to sabotage this corrupted system
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The underlined part is what I'm really concerned about. Thanks for helping
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Welcome to English Forums. The true error is in a verb. See if you can find it.
- Welcome to English Forums.
- The true error is in a verb.
- See if you can find it.
- The sentence is really redundant.
- For example, I'm not even sure if "countlessly many times" is grammatical, but "many examples of" is certainly a better way to phrase it.
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Welcome to English Forums.
The true error is in a verb. See if you can find it.
The sentence is really redundant. For example, I'm not even sure if "countlessly many times" is grammatical, but "many examples of" is certainly a better way to phrase it.
When you fix the verb error, see if you can write the entire sentence more succinctly.
The true error is in a verb. See if you can find it.
The sentence is really redundant. For example, I'm not even sure if "countlessly many times" is grammatical, but "many examples of" is certainly a better way to phrase it.
When you fix the verb error, see if you can write the entire sentence more succinctly.
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You will see countless times that Marcus deliberately try everything he can to sabotage this corrupted system.
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