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Ellisa Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Grammar mistakes
Hello teachers!
Finally I've got the last paragraph in my essay.
Still too far to go to learn English especially grammar and writing.
Please correct the errors here.
Thanks in advance.
To me, it seemed that Sylvia Plath forgave her father and almost got out of the traumatic memories caused by him. I also believed that she had a greater chances to express her agonies by writing literary texts. Nonetheless, she ended up committing a suicide. Nobody knows what exactly led her to choose the worst choice but formed and lasted trauma in her childhood must accounted for a great part. It is true that the trauma of 9/11 still alive. The trauma, comes from disastrous events, will not easily treated such as "Sungryemoon Fire"- or "Daegu subway fire"
Whether it is private or public trauma, most important thing to overcome the trauma is one's strong will to continue the life. Unfortunately, there is no miracle drug for psychological trauma. Work hard with determination to defeat it.
Finally I've got the last paragraph in my essay.
Still too far to go to learn English especially grammar and writing.
Please correct the errors here.
Thanks in advance.
To me, it seemed that Sylvia Plath forgave her father and almost got out of the traumatic memories caused by him. I also believed that she had a greater chances to express her agonies by writing literary texts. Nonetheless, she ended up committing a suicide. Nobody knows what exactly led her to choose the worst choice but formed and lasted trauma in her childhood must accounted for a great part. It is true that the trauma of 9/11 still alive. The trauma, comes from disastrous events, will not easily treated such as "Sungryemoon Fire"- or "Daegu subway fire"
Whether it is private or public trauma, most important thing to overcome the trauma is one's strong will to continue the life. Unfortunately, there is no miracle drug for psychological trauma. Work hard with determination to defeat it.
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) that Sylvia Plath forgave her father and almost got out of ("recovered from" is a better choice of words) the traumatic memories caused by him. I also believed that she had a greater chance s to express her agonies by writing literary texts. Nonetheless, she ended up committing a suicide.
- ) that Sylvia Plath forgave her father and almost got out of ("recovered from" is a better choice of words) the traumatic memories caused by him.
- I also believed that she had a greater chance s to express her agonies by writing literary texts.
- Nonetheless, she ended up committing a suicide.
- Nobody knows what exactly led her to choose to end her life the worst choice but formed and lasted the lasting trauma in her childhood must accounted for a great part of the reason.
- It is true that the trauma of 9/11 is still alive.
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