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Tcl Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

grammar mistakes


Does the e-mail below make sense... any grammar mistake? Thank you very much.

Xxxxx, It was great to hear from you. I felt bad that I could talk to you on the phone for very long. This week has been very busy for me. For the next week, after one o’clock, we can meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th. Please let us know whether any of these dates are okay for you.

Thanks, XXXX
  

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***, It was great to hear from you. ( change this sentence) This week has been very busy (I would use "hectic") for me. For the next week, after one o’clock, we can meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th of this/next month.

  • ***, It was great to hear from you.
  • ( change this sentence) This week has been very busy (I would use "hectic") for me.
  • For the next week, after one o’clock, we can meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th of this/next month.
  • Please let us know whether any of these dates are okay for you.
  • Thanks, *** Paraphrase the sentences in pink.
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***, It was great to hear from you. I felt bad that I could talk to you on the phone for very long.( change this sentence) This week has been very busy (I would use "hectic") for me. For the next week, after one o’clock, we can meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th of this/next month. Ple
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Doll***, It was great to hear from you. I felt bad that I could talk to you on the phone for very long.( change this sentence) This week has been very busy (I would use "hectic") for me. For the next week, after one o’clock, we can meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th o
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below are the correction I made. what do you think? Thanks again

xxxx,



It was great to hear from you too. This week has been very hectic for me. How about if we meet on the 22th, 23th or 24th of this month?



Please forward this e-mail to Joe for me.

Regards,

xxxx
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Yeah, I liked it. Emotion: big smile

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