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Demitri Chuykoff Posted 13 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics
Grammar in song lyrics
Seem so lewed in your piety
Griming the jewels it's insanity
My limbs are palsied for I feel low
Sometimes you are a friend, sometimes a foe
Please, stop spitting into my soul
No, I won't stand it, I'll lose control
If you come to be in place of mine
Your cunning look will change, you'll shed a brine
Refrain:
You hurt me so bad
You make me get mad
And I blame myself for loving you more and more
My heart is bleeding
But I'm still breathing
Time is a plaster for such a deep inner sore
Griming the jewels it's insanity
My limbs are palsied for I feel low
Sometimes you are a friend, sometimes a foe
Please, stop spitting into my soul
No, I won't stand it, I'll lose control
If you come to be in place of mine
Your cunning look will change, you'll shed a brine
Refrain:
You hurt me so bad
You make me get mad
And I blame myself for loving you more and more
My heart is bleeding
But I'm still breathing
Time is a plaster for such a deep inner sore
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Actually, I care about the first quatrain. Especially about using of gerund "griming" in the second line (does it make sense?) and also a word combination "it's insanity" (maybe "is insanity" would be better). Well I don't know maybe there are some other grammatical mistakes or awkward expressions in this whole lyrics. Cause I'm not a native speaker and I'm taking the first steps in writing lyrics
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