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Lenin713 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Grammar help, sentence inside paragraph?

this sentence is inside a paragraph.

Cats also like to have their own space, for example, when they are tired, they usually find a quiet and hidden place to sleep.

how do I fix it?

A: Cats also like to have their own space. For example, when they are tired they usually find a quiet and hidden place to sleep.

B: Well I don't see any spelling errors

C: Replace the comma after space with a semicolon, and it will be fine.

help please Emotion: indifferent

I would prefer using C over A. any suggestions? B is wrong.
  

Top answer

Hi, A and C are both fine. My only caution about C is that your English will look odd if you have lots of semi-colons. Some people like them.

— Clive

  • Hi, A and C are both fine.
  • My only caution about C is that your English will look odd if you have lots of semi-colons.
  • Some people like them.
  • Some people never use them.
  • Clive
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Hi,

A and C are both fine.
My only caution about C is that your English will look odd if you have lots of semi-colons.
Some people like them. Some people never use them.

Clive
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