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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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Grammar help please

Is this sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct-

Their ideology make a matter of life and death for other people and risk their life and it must be condemned.

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anonymous Is this sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct- Their ideology make a matter of life and death for other people and risk their life and it must be condemned. Thanks No. It seems you don't have a good connection between "their ideology" and "a matter of life and death" and "risk their life", so these phrases are islands of coherence floating in an otherwise choppy sea.

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  • anonymous Is this sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct- Their ideology make a matter of life and death for other people and risk their life and it must be condemned.
  • Thanks No.
  • It seems you don't have a good connection between "their ideology" and "a matter of life and death" and "risk their life", so these phrases are islands of coherence floating in an otherwise choppy sea.
  • Maybe you could give more detail about this ideology.
  • That might help explain why those other phrases are important in your sentence.
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anonymous

Is this sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct-

Their ideology make a matter of life and death for other people and risk their life and it must be condemned.

Thanks

No.

It seems you don't have a good connection between "their ideology" and "a matter of life and death"

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