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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to take back our product (Part number 2234) from the customer, quantity of 500 pieces.
Outcome: The above mentioned part has been rejected by the customer as the product head diameter is not as per their records. It should be 11.7 centimeter. Whereas it has only 11.3 centimeter. I have collected the part and that will be sent to our head quarters.
  

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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to retrieve our products (Part #2234) from the customer, a quantity of 500 pieces. Outcome: The above mentioned part was rejected by the customer because the product head diameter is not in accordance with the customer's records. 3 centimeters.

  • Topic: The purpose of the visit was to retrieve our products (Part #2234) from the customer, a quantity of 500 pieces.
  • Outcome: The above mentioned part was rejected by the customer because the product head diameter is not in accordance with the customer's records.
  • 3 centimeters.
  • I have collected the parts, which will be sent to our headquarters.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to retrieve our products (Part #2234) from the customer, a quantity of 500 pieces.

Outcome: The above mentioned part was rejected by the customer because the product head diameter is not in accordance with the customer's records. It should be 11.7 centimeters; it is only 11.3 centimeters. I have collected the parts, which will be sent to our headquarter

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