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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar help please
Please help with first poem! Want to know if grammar is correct, try my best but maybe mistakes still. Thank you 
Layout maybe wrong to.
In a world full of cell phones, concrete and cars,
you show me how beautiful things really are.
From neon signs to crystal clear lakes,
there is no road our adventures won’t take.
Sweet heart, I’m flying when I’m with you,
we are in an old fairy tale where wishes come true.
Here’s to growing up with your best friend;
we will venture on, far past the end.
Where we will go around again,
it’s true,
I will always love you.
Layout maybe wrong to.In a world full of cell phones, concrete and cars,
you show me how beautiful things really are.
From neon signs to crystal clear lakes,
there is no road our adventures won’t take.
Sweet heart, I’m flying when I’m with you,
we are in an old fairy tale where wishes come true.
Here’s to growing up with your best friend;
we will venture on, far past the end.
Where we will go around again,
it’s true,
I will always love you.
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The grammar in the poem is fine, although the third stanza has a few small errors. " Also, I hope you don't think I'm rude but your first few sentences should be: Please help with my first poem! I w ant to know if the grammar is correct .
- The grammar in the poem is fine, although the third stanza has a few small errors.
- " Also, I hope you don't think I'm rude but your first few sentences should be: Please help with my first poem!
- I w ant to know if the grammar is correct .
- I have tried my best but there may still be mistakes.
- Thank you The l ayout may be wrong to o .
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The grammar in the poem is fine, although the third stanza has a few small errors. This is what I would write:
"Sweetheart, I'm flying when I'm with you;
we are in an old fairytale where wishes come true."
Also, I hope you don't think I'm rude but your first few sentences should be:
Please help with my first poem!
"Sweetheart, I'm flying when I'm with you;
we are in an old fairytale where wishes come true."
Also, I hope you don't think I'm rude but your first few sentences should be:
Please help with my first poem!
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