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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

grammar help please!!!

Can you please help with the grammar?

* This team gets really far in the tournament each year. They make it past the quarter finals.
* The tackle of some rugby players is the equivalent of being hit by a car at 30kmh.
* Squash is the sport that you expend the most energy.

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I would rephrase all three examples. This team makes it past the quarter finals in each year's tournament. The impact of a tackle from some rugby players is equivalent to that of a car going 30 km/h.

  • I would rephrase all three examples.
  • This team makes it past the quarter finals in each year's tournament.
  • The impact of a tackle from some rugby players is equivalent to that of a car going 30 km/h.
  • Out of all the sports, Squash is the one in which you spend the most energy.
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I would rephrase all three examples.

This team makes it past the quarter finals in each year's tournament.

The impact of a tackle from some rugby players is equivalent to that of a car going 30 km/h.

Out of all the sports, Squash is the one in which you spend the most energy.

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