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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Grammar Help!!

Does this sentence make sense?? and how can I improve it?

He addressed his concerns about Macbeth, committing evil acts, in other words, killing of Duncan.

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He addressed his concerns about Macbeth 's committing evil acts, namely, the killing of Duncan.

  • He addressed his concerns about Macbeth 's committing evil acts, namely, the killing of Duncan.
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He addressed his concerns about Macbeth's committing evil acts, namely, the killing of Duncan.

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