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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Mitsubishi plant is still under construction. Presently they are sitting in their corporate office. Their plant is nearly 70kms away from their corporate office. It is necessary for our logistics to inform Mitsubishi one day in advance for delivery of these items. So that Mitsubishi can arrange a person to collect the items at their plant.
Please speak to the logistics and inform this on top priority.
Please speak to the logistics and inform this on top priority.
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I would reword this. There are several correct ways to say this. Here is my suggestion: The Mitsubishi plant is still under construction.
- I would reword this.
- There are several correct ways to say this.
- Here is my suggestion: The Mitsubishi plant is still under construction.
- So, at present, they are located at their corporate office, which is nearly 70 kms away from the plant.
- It is therefore is necessary for our logistics department to inform Mitsubishi one day in advance about the delivery of these items so that Mitsubishi can arrange for someone to be at the plant to collect them.
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I would reword this. There are several correct ways to say this. Here is my suggestion:
The Mitsubishi plant is still under construction. So, at present, they are located at their corporate office, which is nearly 70 kms away from the plant. It is therefore is necessary for our logistics department to inform Mitsubishi one day in advance about the delivery of these items so that
The Mitsubishi plant is still under construction. So, at present, they are located at their corporate office, which is nearly 70 kms away from the plant. It is therefore is necessary for our logistics department to inform Mitsubishi one day in advance about the delivery of these items so that
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