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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic:
The purpose of the visit was to submit our Rivet samples to Otis elevator company for their test.
Outcome:
I couldn’t submit the samples as the concerned person of Otis elevator company Mr. Fernandez was not in the factory as he wanted to go to their another factory to resolve some quality issues. I don’t want to hand-over the samples to other persons as he/she may miss it out. I conveyed my concern to Mr. Fernandez over phone. He told me to meet him on Thursday by 2pm and he will collect the samples.
The purpose of the visit was to submit our Rivet samples to Otis elevator company for their test.
Outcome:
I couldn’t submit the samples as the concerned person of Otis elevator company Mr. Fernandez was not in the factory as he wanted to go to their another factory to resolve some quality issues. I don’t want to hand-over the samples to other persons as he/she may miss it out. I conveyed my concern to Mr. Fernandez over phone. He told me to meet him on Thursday by 2pm and he will collect the samples.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to submit our r ivet samples to Otis E levator C ompany for their test s . Outcome: I couldn’t submit the samples on this occasion as our contact for Otis E levator C ompany , Mr. Fernandez , was not in the factory .
- Topic: The purpose of the visit was to submit our r ivet samples to Otis E levator C ompany for their test s .
- Outcome: I couldn’t submit the samples on this occasion as our contact for Otis E levator C ompany , Mr.
- Fernandez , was not in the factory .
- He had gone to another factory to resolve some quality issues.
- I didn't want to hand the samples over to any other Otis employee as he/she may mis place them .
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Topic:
The purpose of the visit was to submit our rivet samples to Otis Elevator Company for their tests.
Outcome:
I couldn’t submit the samples on this occasion as our contact for Otis Elevator Company, Mr. Fernandez, was not in the factory. He had gone to another factory to resolve some quality issues.
The purpose of the visit was to submit our rivet samples to Otis Elevator Company for their tests.
Outcome:
I couldn’t submit the samples on this occasion as our contact for Otis Elevator Company, Mr. Fernandez, was not in the factory. He had gone to another factory to resolve some quality issues.
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