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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Grammar help

As I pointed out before, they are already buying this item from Delhi at 1.80 INR. They are looking for alternative sources to reduce their cost. If we offer 2.14 INR, Logically we won't get the order. We are losing a business opportunity worth 32 million INR/year. If we offer lesser than 1.80 INR, ie. 1.65 or 1.70 INR, perhaps we may get the orders.
  

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The grammar is generally good, with a couple of corrections. However, for clarity, I would make some changes, especially the last sentence. (Also: don't capitalize "Logically" in the middle of a sentence).

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  • The grammar is generally good, with a couple of corrections.
  • However, for clarity, I would make some changes, especially the last sentence.
  • (Also: don't capitalize "Logically" in the middle of a sentence).
  • 89 INR.
  • However, they are looking for alternative sources to reduce their cost.
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The grammar is generally good, with a couple of corrections. However, for clarity, I would make some changes, especially the last sentence. (Also: don't capitalize "Logically" in the middle of a sentence). My suggestions:

As I pointed out before, they are already buying this item from Delhi at 1.89 INR. However, they are looking for alternative sources to reduce their cost. If
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You are welcome. (p.s., I see I copied the first price wrong, as 1.89 vs 1.80).
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