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0 I did not ask for the sales forecast from the customer, because after having discussed it with Christine on 4 March, we were both of the opinion that this is not the right time to do so, but I will request it next time they place a new order with us. Do you agree? Or would you prefer I asked for it right now? 0-
  

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02del 02br 01i 00It's OK. One sentence is a little long; the whole thing could be tightened up:02i 02br 02br 00I did not ask for the sales forecast from the customer because after 01b 00discussing02b 00 it with Christine on 4 March, 01b 00we both thought02b 00 that this is01b 00 the wrong time02b 00 to do so01b 00. However, 02b 00I will request it next time they place 01b 00an order02b 00.

— Mister Micawber

  • 02del 02br 01i 00It's OK.
  • One sentence is a little long; the whole thing could be tightened up:02i 02br 02br 00I did not ask for the sales forecast from the customer because after 01b 00discussing02b 00 it with Christine on 4 March, 01b 00we both thought02b 00 that this is01b 00 the wrong time02b 00 to do so01b 00.
  • However, 02b 00I will request it next time they place 01b 00an order02b 00.
  • Do you 01b 00agree, or02b 00 would you prefer I 01b 00ask02b 00 for it right now?
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