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Akki Posted 19 years ago
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0Need help with the following sentence: (Please pay special attention to the commas)02br
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001.) 00Secondly, advertising products on channels such as MTV through celebrity endorsement, will create new aspects of the market via diversification of the XYZ image.02br
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00Which version of the following sounds better?02br
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001.) 00However, mailing of direct mailers, incentives, and complimentary certificates to our card holders will continue to on a biweekly basis...02br
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002.) 00However, direct mailers, incentives, and complimentary certificates will continue to be mailed to our loyal customers on a biweekly basis.02br
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00Regards,02br
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00~Akki0-
  

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02font 00 No comma. 02font 02br 02br 00#2. But try to avoid repeating the term 'mail' (mailers, mailed).

— Clive

  • 02font 00 No comma.
  • 02font 02br 02br 00#2.
  • But try to avoid repeating the term 'mail' (mailers, mailed).
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive0-
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0Hi,02br
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01font001.) Secondly, advertising products on channels such as MTV through celebrity endorsement will create new aspects of the market via diversification of the XYZ image.02font00 No comma. What does it mean to 01i00create new aspects02i00 of something?02br
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