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David Forman Posted 14 years ago
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Grammar errors in the story.. I am confused
She was an attractive lady walking down on the road in her high-heels and a beautiful bag was slung across her shoulder, it was a clear evident of her pedantic nature. I just could not stop looking her noticing how weird her gait was. What kind of woman could walk on the road without fears of getting plundered except one with high level of confidence? I followed her; she suddenly stopped when she got close to an ATM machine. She looked around as if was……
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I have underlined problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised version here. ) .
- I have underlined problem areas.
- Please try to correct them and post your revised version here.
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- I just could not stop looking her noticing how weird her gait was.
- What kind of woman could walk on the road without fears of getting plundered except one wi th hig h level of confidence?
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I have underlined problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised version here.
She was an attractive lady walking down on the road in her high-heels and a beautiful bag was slung across her shoulder, it was a clear evident of her pedantic nature (This makes no sense; there is no evidence of her being a pedant in the text.)
She was an attractive lady walking down on the road in her high-heels and a beautiful bag was slung across her shoulder, it was a clear evident of her pedantic nature (This makes no sense; there is no evidence of her being a pedant in the text.)
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