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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Grammar errors--Cover letter
Hello, below is a cover letter for a job application.
Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything? Thank you greatly for your time.
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To Whom It May Concern:
I am pleased to have the opportunity to apply for the role of Marketing Assistant, which was advertised on X.
I am a business graduate, who majored in both marketing and sales. I was approached for the honours program, but I believe experience is more important. I seek an exciting career in marketing, as this is not only my passion but also my key strength.
I gained experience in marketing by completing a nine-week internship with X, during which I created and implemented a brand project, interfaced with both external and internal customers, and developed and maintained both a company website and a customer database. My greatest learning experience was realising the importance of business relationships.
Additionally, while I was at X, I refined my skills on computer applications and produced presentations using PowerPoint. My communication skills are first-rate, and I am able to work efficiently, having successfully organised my time between University projects, my sporting commitments and my part-time jobs.
I enjoy working in groups, and I have had much experience in this area, as I have always been a part of team sports and the leader of group projects at University.
Most importantly, I am intelligent, passionate and self-motivated individual, who would love the opportunity to work as a marketing assistant.
Thank you for your attention. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Anon
Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything? Thank you greatly for your time.
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To Whom It May Concern:
I am pleased to have the opportunity to apply for the role of Marketing Assistant, which was advertised on X.
I am a business graduate, who majored in both marketing and sales. I was approached for the honours program, but I believe experience is more important. I seek an exciting career in marketing, as this is not only my passion but also my key strength.
I gained experience in marketing by completing a nine-week internship with X, during which I created and implemented a brand project, interfaced with both external and internal customers, and developed and maintained both a company website and a customer database. My greatest learning experience was realising the importance of business relationships.
Additionally, while I was at X, I refined my skills on computer applications and produced presentations using PowerPoint. My communication skills are first-rate, and I am able to work efficiently, having successfully organised my time between University projects, my sporting commitments and my part-time jobs.
I enjoy working in groups, and I have had much experience in this area, as I have always been a part of team sports and the leader of group projects at University.
Most importantly, I am intelligent, passionate and self-motivated individual, who would love the opportunity to work as a marketing assistant.
Thank you for your attention. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Anon
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Hi, below is a cover letter for a job application. Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything? Thank you greatly for your time.
- Hi, below is a cover letter for a job application.
- Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything?
- Thank you greatly for your time.
- -- To Whom It May Concern: Never start such a letter in this way.
- Try to find the name of the preson you should write to.
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Hi,
below is a cover letter for a job application.
Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything? Thank you greatly for your time.
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To Whom It May Concern: Never start such a letter in this way.
Try to find the name of the preson you should write to. (eg consider calling to ask).
Or else write to '
below is a cover letter for a job application.
Could someone please fix any errors, improve it, or suggest anything? Thank you greatly for your time.
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To Whom It May Concern: Never start such a letter in this way.
Try to find the name of the preson you should write to. (eg consider calling to ask).
Or else write to '
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Hello, Clive,
thank you for taking the time to proofread my letter. You provided some subtle, yet important, ideas, which I have taken into consideration. Yes, where I live, people generally enclose a resume; Since I'm sending this via email with both the letter and resume attached, I should think it's unecessary to say the resume is enclosed. What do you think?
thank you for taking the time to proofread my letter. You provided some subtle, yet important, ideas, which I have taken into consideration. Yes, where I live, people generally enclose a resume; Since I'm sending this via email with both the letter and resume attached, I should think it's unecessary to say the resume is enclosed. What do you think?
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Hi,
Where I live, here's the basic process.
The purpose of your cover letter is to get them to read your resume.
The purpose of your resume is to get you an interview.
The purpose of an interview is to get you the job.
So, it makes sense to refer to the resume in your letter.
( By the way, the reason a
Where I live, here's the basic process.
The purpose of your cover letter is to get them to read your resume.
The purpose of your resume is to get you an interview.
The purpose of an interview is to get you the job.
So, it makes sense to refer to the resume in your letter.
( By the way, the reason a
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