0
Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Grammar errors

Though marred by some technical issues (many of which have already been addressed by patches) and at times confusing to navigate in, "Arx Fatalis" nevertheless delivers a memorable, original role-playing experience", and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IGN's Dan Adams overall enjoying the game stating that "The atmosphere, spell system, puzzles, voices, and story were good and interesting enough to give me a pretty enjoyable experience."

I think "addressed" should have been "redressed" and #1 should have been rewritten as #2.

1. ", and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IGN's Dan Adams overall enjoying the game stating that~"
2. ", IGN's Dan Adams overall having enjoyed the game and stating that~

I'd like to know whether or not my thought is right.

Thank you in advance for your help.
  

Top answer

park sang joon I think "addressed" should have been "redressed" No; 'address' = 'attend to'. 'Redress' is not really appropriate there. 1.

— Mister Micawber

  • park sang joon I think "addressed" should have been "redressed" No; 'address' = 'attend to'.
  • 'Redress' is not really appropriate there.
  • 1.
  • ", and IGN 's Dan Adams overall enjoying the game stating that~"2.
  • ", IGN's Dan Adams overall having enjoyed the game and stating that~ Well, it certainly needs repair, but your grammar is wrong, too.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
park sang joonI think "addressed" should have been "redressed"
No; 'address' = 'attend to'. 'Redress' is not really appropriate there.
park sang joonand #1 should have been rewritten as #2.1. ", and IGN 's Dan Adams overall enjoying the game stating that~"2. ", IGN's Dan Adams overall having enjoyed the game and stating that~
0
0
Thank you, Mr.Micawber for your very helpful answer. Emotion: smile
I was wondering why I can't use the participle phrase ", IGN's Dan Adam
0
0
park sang joonI was wondering why I can't use the participle phrase ", IGN's Dan Adams overall having enjoyed the game and stating that~"
Because a finite verb is needed.
0

Related Questions