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Gaw Kai Muh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Grammar Errors

Hi English Experts, please correct my English, thanks. ’A world has many handsome men nonetheless they have not been married in that they are too reticent about revealing their personal feeling.’
  

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The world has many handsome men, but they have not gotten married because they are too reticent about revealing their personal feelings.

— Mister Micawber

  • The world has many handsome men, but they have not gotten married because they are too reticent about revealing their personal feelings.
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The world has many handsome men, but they have not gotten married because they are too reticent about revealing their personal feelings.
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Sigh,why can't I use the words 'nonetheless' and 'in that' again?
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They are awkward, stilted and unnatural. Learners learn new words and then want to throw them in anywhere. Use simple, direct expressions.
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