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Ellisa Posted 16 years ago
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Selected as “The most beautiful Car Brand” at Apr 2, 2010 AUDI Design Trophy
- Maintained the excellent design reputation receiving over 26% of support among the leading top 50 car brands.



Hello teachers!

Let me know what is ingrammatical here.

Thanks in advance!
  

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The exact meaning of "26% of support" is difficult for me to grasp. Who maintained an excellent reputation? The trophy?

  • The exact meaning of "26% of support" is difficult for me to grasp.
  • Who maintained an excellent reputation?
  • The trophy?
  • That's strange.
  • Did AUDI present the trophy or win the trophy?
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The exact meaning of "26% of support" is difficult for me to grasp.
Who maintained an excellent reputation? The trophy? That's strange.
Did AUDI present the trophy or win the trophy? That's unclear.

"Car Brand" seems like a strange combination. Is there really a competition to win "The Most Beautiful Car Brand"? Or did you invent this award? It seems that it should be "The
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Thanks for your help!

Well, the sentences are a sort of title, so I removed the Subject. It's also hard for me to write.

1. 26% of the people voted for AUDI as THE MOST BEAUTIFUL CAR.

2. Audi maintained the excellent design reputation.

3. So they won the trophy.

I hope those can be helpful for your understanding.

Thank you so much!

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