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Rahul2689 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Grammar error
hi all
I have been unable to judge why all of these are correct(my teacher thinks so).
Please help me out with these sentences
High-end ready-to-wear lines are sometimes based upon a famous gown or pattern that is then duplicated to raise the designer’s visibility level.
A majority of the population had been enrolling into the family planning programme when the government began the altered methods and computerized processes of enrollment.
The ambiguity of the situation not only amazes the audience but it also suggests that the confluence of such styles of acting is a possibility which has now perforated the foundations of traditional styles of acting in drama
Thanks
I have been unable to judge why all of these are correct(my teacher thinks so).
Please help me out with these sentences
High-end ready-to-wear lines are sometimes based upon a famous gown or pattern that is then duplicated to raise the designer’s visibility level.
A majority of the population had been enrolling into the family planning programme when the government began the altered methods and computerized processes of enrollment.
The ambiguity of the situation not only amazes the audience but it also suggests that the confluence of such styles of acting is a possibility which has now perforated the foundations of traditional styles of acting in drama
Thanks
Top answer
Some parts of the sentences could benefit from recasting, but the only real correction I would make is 'enrolling in '.
- Some parts of the sentences could benefit from recasting, but the only real correction I would make is 'enrolling in '.
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Some parts of the sentences could benefit from recasting, but the only real correction I would make is 'enrolling in'.
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High-end ready-to-wear lines are sometimes based upon a famous gown or pattern that is then duplicated to raise the designer’s visibility level.
Here UPON a famous is awkward Shouldn't it be ON a famous
A majority of the population had been enrolling into the family planning programme when the government began the altered methods and computerized processes of en
Here UPON a famous is awkward Shouldn't it be ON a famous
A majority of the population had been enrolling into the family planning programme when the government began the altered methods and computerized processes of en
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