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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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0 (1) I want to begin by saluting Professor Ravi Sharma for having brought this important conference into being. Of all the people I think of 00 as the man who gets things done. 02 br
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00 Should it be "is the man"? Please insert commas where necessary. 02 br
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00 (2) But as the story has it- 01 del 00 I'm not sure this is quite right 02 del 00 -(if it pertains to) Galileo, (but)---it used to be thought the larger objects fell faster than smaller objects. 02 br
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00 Should "that" be inserted before "the larger objects" 02 br
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00 (3) Now, this new way of knowing- 01 del 00 proof 02 del 00 -which retired false hypotheses and put in place their alternative- 01 del 00 ones that were confirmed 02 del 00 -and went on into laboratory experiment. 02 br
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00 Are there too many emdashes? Please clarify. 02 br
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00 (4) Let's just think about this subject that has brought us together. Religio is Latin for rebinding. And religion involves belonging and, when that belonging has been sundered, then work toward rebinding it. 02 br
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00 Does the last sentence "And religion...rebinding it" has clarity in mening? Please rephrase. 02 br
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00 (5) But let me remind you, the only submission by true people, a scientist and religionists, were the only one they wouldn't touch. 02 br
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00 (6) September 11 proved that the most advanced parts of the current civilization is prone to harm from its most marginalized parts and the source of this vulnerability should be found in different layers of politics, culture, and economy. 02 br
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00 (7) Could you speak a little more as a blogger yourself about the role of weblogs and the new generation. 02 br
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00 can question mark inserted instead of period 02 br
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00 (8) I repeat what I said in my talk that so many religious conflicts in the world are just called religious. In fact, they are more political issues and they have their roots in politics. 02 br
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00 "they are more political..." Does it make sense? 0-
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00 Should it be "is the man"? Please insert commas where necessary. 02 br
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00 (2) But as the story has it- 01 del
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00 Should "that" be inserted before "the larger objects" 02 br
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00 (3) Now, this new way of knowing- 01 del
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00 Are there too many emdashes? Please clarify. 02 br
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00 (4) Let's just think about this subject that has brought us together. Religio is Latin for rebinding. And religion involves belonging and, when that belonging has been sundered, then work toward rebinding it. 02 br
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00 Does the last sentence "And religion...rebinding it" has clarity in mening? Please rephrase. 02 br
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00 (5) But let me remind you, the only submission by true people, a scientist and religionists, were the only one they wouldn't touch. 02 br
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00 (6) September 11 proved that the most advanced parts of the current civilization is prone to harm from its most marginalized parts and the source of this vulnerability should be found in different layers of politics, culture, and economy. 02 br
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00 (7) Could you speak a little more as a blogger yourself about the role of weblogs and the new generation. 02 br
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00 can question mark inserted instead of period 02 br
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00 (8) I repeat what I said in my talk that so many religious conflicts in the world are just called religious. In fact, they are more political issues and they have their roots in politics. 02 br
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00 "they are more political..." Does it make sense? 0-
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02 br 01 b 01 i 00 Do this: 02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 (1) I want to begin by praising Professor Ravi Sharma for having brought this important conference into being. Of all the people I know, I think of Ravi as 'the man who gets things done'. 02 br 00 (2) But as the story has it, before Galileo, it used to be thought that larger objects fell faster than smaller objects.
- 02 br 01 b 01 i 00 Do this: 02 i 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 (1) I want to begin by praising Professor Ravi Sharma for having brought this important conference into being.
- Of all the people I know, I think of Ravi as 'the man who gets things done'.
- 02 br 00 (2) But as the story has it, before Galileo, it used to be thought that larger objects fell faster than smaller objects.
- 02 br 00 (3) Now, this new way of retiring false hypotheses and putting in place valid alternatives continued into laboratory experimentation.
- 02 br 00 (4) Let's just think about this subject that has brought us together.
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00 (1) I want to begin by praising Professor Ravi Sharma for having brought this important conference into being. Of all the people I know, I think of Ravi as 'the man who gets things done'. 02 br
00 (2) But as the story has it, before Galileo, it used to be thought that larger objects
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00 (1) I want to begin by praising Professor Ravi Sharma for having brought this important conference into being. Of all the people I know, I think of Ravi as 'the man who gets things done'. 02 br
00 (2) But as the story has it, before Galileo, it used to be thought that larger objects
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