0(1) As I thought about the subject, it seems to me that the teachings of Jesus and the sacred texts of the New Testament would be a good starting point for us to engage tonight’s subject of 01i00What on Earth is Evangelism?02i00 The text in the New Testament, at the end of what we call the Sermon on the Mount, for me, has become a paradigm for which to frame my own understanding of my own views, my own beliefs, but also how to relate and understand people who come to different conclusions in life than I personally have come to.02br 02br 02br 00Is the usage "my own understanding of my own views" ok? Please clarify.02br 02br 02br 00(2) I spend part of my weeks and months and year in various parts of the world looking at poverty face to face, where some people live with horrific circumstances, not because they've created those circumstances, but, more often, they have inherited them.02br 02br 02br 00Can 01b00spend02b00 replaced with01b00 have spent02b00? Please clarify.02br 02br 02br 00(3) What has sensitized me in more recent years from this metaphor is to also say to us that everyone faces storms. Sometimes, those storms come out of huge systems.02br 02br 02br 00Is the usage " is to also say to us" ok? Please clarify.02br 02br 02br 00(4) And so as I live and move and have my being on the face of this planet, I'm helped with this framework, with this paradigm, to say belief is in everyone's spirit. It's not just belief but it then begins to shape us, drive convictions in.02br 02br 02br 00Is the sentence construction "not just belief but it then begins to shape us" ok? Please advise.02br 02br 02br 00(5) So it's 01b00a02b00 positive initiative to invite people to respond to the good news and to move from outside to inside, in an initial encounter experience response to God.02br 02br 02br 00Can 01b00a 02b00be inserted? Please check whether the phrase "in an initial encounter experience response to God." makes sense.0-
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01) Seems OK. 02br 02br 002) No, you have the present simple throughout. 02br 004) No, not good.
— Marius Hancu
01) Seems OK.
02br 02br 002) No, you have the present simple throughout.
02br 004) No, not good.
02br 005) "a" is OK.
No, the sentence isn't good.
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01) Seems OK. 02br 02br 002) No, you have the present simple throughout. 02br 003) No, not good.02br 004) No, not good. 02br 005) "a" is OK. No, the sentence isn't good. 02br 00You need to read more FICTION, you invent turns of phrase which do not exist in idiomatic English. You don't have the right feeling for the language