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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Grammar corrections, cant see mistake, help open eyes

I don't see anything wrong but not sure, will a english speaker please help me spot structural mistakes grammar?

The population is very dense in the city, but the further you drive away the city the more scatter and spotted it gets.


He tries to keep busy so as not to think of her.

10 dollars out of 40 is 25%.

Everything is so close to everything that you don't need a car.

He knows that when my back hurt that I can't go out.

What aisle are you parked parking lot.

The more valuable things are behind the counter.

You are the person who's travelled the furthest to come to this store.

That's where we would have taken you had you gotten sick.

He didn't take you criticizing him very well.

100 people ended up showing up to the party.

Thanks lot
  

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1. The population is very dense in the city, but as you drive away from the city the settlements are scattered and the population is sparse. 2.

  • 1.
  • The population is very dense in the city, but as you drive away from the city the settlements are scattered and the population is sparse.
  • 2.
  • This is okay.
  • 3.
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1. The population is very dense in the city, but as you drive away from the city the settlements are scattered and the population is sparse.

2. This is okay.

3. This is okay.

4. This is okay.

5. He knows that when my back hurts I can't go out.

6. Where are you parked in the parking lot?

7. This is okay.

8. You're the person who

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