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Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen? Then told her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation? Please confirm.
  

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Hi, Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen? Then told her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation? Please confirm.

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  • Hi, Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen?
  • Then told her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation?
  • Please confirm.
  • Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen, and then tell her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation?
  • Please confirm.
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Hi,

Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen? Then told her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation? Please confirm.

Can/May I confirm this new order with Helen, and then tell her that you will send the official purchase order to her after your vacation? Please confirm.

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