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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

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Topic: The purpose of the visit was try convincing Mr. Jayaram for the delay in delivery of Pneumatic insertion tool.
Outcome: We were supposed to deliver the tool in October. Unfortunately we did not receive the tool from Germany. I assured Mr. Jayaram that we would deliver the tool by 25th of November. He has accepted it.
Further plan: Make sure that there shouldn't be further delay.
  

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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to try to convince Mr. Jayaram to delay the delivery of the pneumatic insertion tool. Outcome: We were supposed to deliver the tool in October.

  • Topic: The purpose of the visit was to try to convince Mr.
  • Jayaram to delay the delivery of the pneumatic insertion tool.
  • Outcome: We were supposed to deliver the tool in October.
  • Unfortunately, we did not receive the tool from Germany.
  • I assured Mr.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to try to convince Mr. Jayaram to delay the delivery of the pneumatic insertion tool.
Outcome: We were supposed to deliver the tool in October. Unfortunately, we did not receive the tool from Germany. I assured Mr. Jayaram that we would deliver the tool by the 25th of November. He accepted that delivery date.
Further plan: Make sure that there will not b

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