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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to discuss on price & competition.
Outcome: Alstom's end customer Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut against our rivet nut 34366040230. Rivet India has offered a price of 4.20 INR per piece. The torque observed minimum 4.5Nm and maximum 7Nm. Our rivet nut delivers 3.5Nm minimum and 4Nm maximum. They feel that in all aspects Rivet India's rivet nut is superior than our rivet nut. Thus, Schneider has suggested Alstom to discontinue the business with us and start buying rivet nuts from Rivet India. Since Alstom is happy with our service, they told me that If we are able to reduce our price to 4.00 INR, they will continue the business with us.
Outcome: Alstom's end customer Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut against our rivet nut 34366040230. Rivet India has offered a price of 4.20 INR per piece. The torque observed minimum 4.5Nm and maximum 7Nm. Our rivet nut delivers 3.5Nm minimum and 4Nm maximum. They feel that in all aspects Rivet India's rivet nut is superior than our rivet nut. Thus, Schneider has suggested Alstom to discontinue the business with us and start buying rivet nuts from Rivet India. Since Alstom is happy with our service, they told me that If we are able to reduce our price to 4.00 INR, they will continue the business with us.
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to discuss price & competition. ), Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut over our rivet nut 34366040230. 20 INR per piece.
- Topic: The purpose of the visit was to discuss price & competition.
- ), Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut over our rivet nut 34366040230.
- 20 INR per piece.
- The torque observed had (The torque observed was?
- showed?
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to discuss price & competition.
Outcome: Alstom's end customer, (I don't know what an end customer is.), Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut over our rivet nut 34366040230. Rivet India has offered a price of 4.20 INR per piece. The torque observed had (The torque observed was? showed? exhibited?) a minim
Outcome: Alstom's end customer, (I don't know what an end customer is.), Schneider has tested and approved Rivet India's rivet nut over our rivet nut 34366040230. Rivet India has offered a price of 4.20 INR per piece. The torque observed had (The torque observed was? showed? exhibited?) a minim
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I assume end customer is another name for end user or end consumer, the person or entity that actually uses the product, as distinct from the wholesaler or retailer who sells the product.
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