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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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The electrical tool demo was conducted with 8mm mandrel. Though Mr. Jayaram was quiet satisfied with the performance of the tool, he felt that the pneumatic tool would deliver better performance than the electrical tool. He would like to see the demo of the same. Since pneumatic type demo tool is not available with me, I won't be able to show him the demo.

He has asked me to send an offer for the electrical tool with 8mm to 12mm, 8-32 and 10-32UNF mandrels; pneumatic tool with prewinder type and the respective exchange units.
  

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The electrical tool demo was conducted with an 8 mm mandrel. Though Mr. Jayaram was quite satisfied with the performance of the tool, he felt that the pneumatic tool would deliver better performance than the electrical tool.

  • The electrical tool demo was conducted with an 8 mm mandrel.
  • Though Mr.
  • Jayaram was quite satisfied with the performance of the tool, he felt that the pneumatic tool would deliver better performance than the electrical tool.
  • He would like to see a demo of the pneumatic tool.
  • Since a pneumatic type demo tool is not available, I won't be able to show him the demo.
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The electrical tool demo was conducted with an 8 mm mandrel. Though Mr. Jayaram was quite satisfied with the performance of the tool, he felt that the pneumatic tool would deliver better performance than the electrical tool. He would like to see a demo of the pneumatic tool. Since a pneumatic type demo tool is not available, I won't be able to show him the demo.

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