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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Grammar correction please?

Mr. Joseph has arrived in India today and I took him to the customer "CMC Ltd" where I wanted to conduct the demonstration of our tool. I feel he is a decent guy and he will shortly merge into our working culture. May we give him a laptop for learning of our products which are in PPT and PDF format?
  

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achucoul Mr. Joseph If 'Joseph' is not a family name, it should not be preceded by a title.

  • achucoul Mr.
  • Joseph If 'Joseph' is not a family name, it should not be preceded by a title.
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achucoulMr. Joseph
If 'Joseph' is not a family name, it should not be preceded by a title.
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Okay. Please consider the name as ''Mr. Raj". Is grammar okay?
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