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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Grammar correction please?
Dear Mr. Raj,
Last year I showed ABB ltd a demo of our tools. They promised us buying our products. I gave them our offer for the tools on 17th of May 2015. But they dropped the plan of buying our products because they stopped manufacturing enclosures where our product would be needed.
Last year I showed ABB ltd a demo of our tools. They promised us buying our products. I gave them our offer for the tools on 17th of May 2015. But they dropped the plan of buying our products because they stopped manufacturing enclosures where our product would be needed.
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If you want the minimum change, you could say: Dear Mr. Raj, Last year I showed ABB Ltd a demo of our tools. They promised t hat they would be buying our products.
- If you want the minimum change, you could say: Dear Mr.
- Raj, Last year I showed ABB Ltd a demo of our tools.
- They promised t hat they would be buying our products.
- I gave them our offer for the tools on the 17th of May 2015.
- But they dropped their plan of buying our products because they stopped manufacturing the enclosures where our product would be needed.
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If you want the minimum change, you could say:
Dear Mr. Raj,
Last year I showed ABB Ltd a demo of our tools. They promised that they would be buying our products. I gave them our offer for the tools on the 17th of May 2015. But they dropped their plan of buying our products because they stopped manufacturing the enclosures where our product woul
Dear Mr. Raj,
Last year I showed ABB Ltd a demo of our tools. They promised that they would be buying our products. I gave them our offer for the tools on the 17th of May 2015. But they dropped their plan of buying our products because they stopped manufacturing the enclosures where our product woul
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