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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
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Topic: The purpose of the visit was to conduct our pneumatic tool demo to MSSL Ltd.
Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and would like to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'. I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412. Although the top management of MSSL were satisfied with our tool performance, the operators weren't. They felt that manual insertion method is quiet easier for them. However, they will discuss in this matter within the team and get back to us soon.
Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and would like to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'. I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412. Although the top management of MSSL were satisfied with our tool performance, the operators weren't. They felt that manual insertion method is quiet easier for them. However, they will discuss in this matter within the team and get back to us soon.
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I would say: Topic: Our visit to conduct a pneumatic tool demo for MSSL Ltd. Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and wanted to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'. I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412.
- I would say: Topic: Our visit to conduct a pneumatic tool demo for MSSL Ltd.
- Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and wanted to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'.
- I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412.
- Although the top management of MSSL were satisfied with our tool's performance, the operators weren't.
- They felt that manual insertion method is easier for them.
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I would say:
Topic: Our visit to conduct a pneumatic tool demo for MSSL Ltd.
Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and wanted to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'. I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412. Although the top management of MSSL were satisfied with our tool's performance, the operators weren't. They felt that manual i
Topic: Our visit to conduct a pneumatic tool demo for MSSL Ltd.
Outcome: MSSL is using manual tools and wanted to see the demo of the 'Pneumatic tool'. I showed them the demo of our pneumatic tool, model number P-S-412. Although the top management of MSSL were satisfied with our tool's performance, the operators weren't. They felt that manual i
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