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Achucoul Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Grammar correction please

Dear Mr. John,

This is an approximate offer. We can give you our final offer only after we get a 3D drawing of your application. As the investment is more, we would like to give you an optimal solution to you.

Kindly arrange to send us your application 3D drawing.
  

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Consider using, "a preliminary estimate" instead of "an approximate offer."
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achucoulMr. John
Mr (as well as Mrs and Miss) is not normally used with first names. It is normally only with surnames.

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