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Msdin Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Grammar correction please

Dear Mr. Ravi,

Thanks for your request of quotation.

With reference to our telephonic discussions, we are pleased to submit our offer for the products you have enquired.

We look forward to received your valuable order.
  

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Thank you for your request. With reference to our discussions on the phone , we are pleased to submit our offer for the products about which you enquired. We look forward to receiving your order.

— Anonymous

  • Thank you for your request.
  • With reference to our discussions on the phone , we are pleased to submit our offer for the products about which you enquired.
  • We look forward to receiving your order.
  • I wouldn't use the word "valuable" here--it makes it seem as though you are only interested in money!
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Thank you for your request.

With reference to our discussions on the phone, we are pleased to submit our offer for the products about which you enquired.

We look forward to receiving your order.
I wouldn't use the word "valuable" here--it makes it seem as though you are only interested in money!
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